Spider Cypher 3 verses by me

HappyBunny: http://www.youtube.com/user/HappyBunny001 Bleach: http://www.youtube.com/user/RingerINC yeah i'm not the best, but i'm working and thought this would be good just to test my ish w/e hope you guys enjoy it..appreciate feedback, i know my articulation is weak though. Lyrics: Verse 1: Feeling the beat, spitting the heat, Im elite/ Your listening, and you know you cant compete Im to complete/ Im climbing up the mountain to reach the top of the peak/ I choose to never slack, I will beat you with my stunning speech/ Next week if you come back Im gonna bash you till you sleep/ Slash you in the spine, Im sublime and your bleak/ All of these emcees are sheep, so I lash em till they herd(heard)/ If they dont get it at first listen again, listen and learn/ Being skilled and artful, I still work hard to heighten concern/ Dissin to burn, Im spittin masterful words, wait your turn/ Your spastic with your flow, even though you dont know/ I keep it uniform like private school folk, this aint faux/ Its true, just like the sky is blue, now you try to chew/ But my words dont go down easy like Buckleys on a spoon/ Ill call you crazy cause, Im screwing you up like a pile driver/ You cant reach me, the reason? Because Im a mile higher/ Verse 2: Half way up the hill, persevere until I reach the top/ Wont flop like bellies in the pool, Im cooking haters in a pot/ Looking down, booking them for the dull tracks they wrote/ Im macro on the mic, they blow and Im spectacular, take note/ They below me, look at the height of my feets(feats), they will discover/ Ill make them recede, cause they frontin like no other/ Im stopping them in their tracks, these bitches lack the passion/ Hip-hop aint about fashion, In PJs look at all these kids Im smashin/ They like little ants, those fags are brittle, as they prance like gays/ Today is no different than any other one so stay/ Watch me as Im defiling, violent with the words I say/ Defacing holy ornaments, sacrilegious with my praise (preys)/ Eat up everything, win tournaments like Roger Federer/ The developer, photos of destruction, its a red alert/ Im down with champions of the world, victory inevitable/ Drown you with a flood of words, this is me, incredible/ Verse 3: I strip masters of titles, to insure Im not grotesque/ Not the best but, despite this Im on my way to the crest/ Of the mountain, ultimate test, video game with cheat code/ Like I got unlimited lives, I will not retreat or fold/ This dont bode well for others, they positively pretend/ With my pen I stress good values, when I change the present men/ Eleven, ten, thats the direction, my opponents going, down/ With proper mentality I swear Im slewing clowns/ In reality I will rule, totalitarian describes my tools/ Barbarian like, I wield arbitral weaponry in a duel/ Bringing judgment controversially like the King-Byng Thing/ Respond courteously if you dont, then expect the death swing/ At the top of the mountain, Ive met my goal, I am king/ Trample upon souls, reached ascension like Im lord of the ring/ This aint treason, Im just greater than the last monarchs legion/ Now I rule this region, no debate, like an exilarch Im leadin/ Started at the bottom, I reached the epitome/ Legitimately, I am the king over this land and sea/ No beatin me Im not appearing weak, Im a monolith/ Im high on top, so the world seems bottomless/ Lyrics coming soon